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COVERS page 08 by LightlyBow COVERS page 08 by LightlyBow
This is Jake. Never expect him to shave, and you will never be disappointed.

Whew! I'm in a terrible rush, so I'll add comments later and maybe touch up a few spots on this page (particularly the nonexistent backgrounds).

Edit: Yeah, the lockers are kind of... better. Now. It's very nice to have such an easy background (excuse me, "environment") to draw for the school setting. Panel lacking dimension? Add some lockers! Panel lacking visual interest? Add some lockers! Man, oh man, what am I going to do once we leave the hallways? :)

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:iconwakerra:
Wakerra Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
HOLY COW I thought that guy looked familiar  paranatural.net/chapter-4-page… Coincidence??
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:iconlightlybow:
LightlyBow Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Student
Haha that's awesome! Yep, it's a coincidence, but I think I have to go read that comic now :)
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:iconwakerra:
Wakerra Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
its a very good comic.  The guy is pretty over the top with facial expressions, but he's got some really good scripting
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greeni-studio Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011  Professional General Artist
"Never expect him to shave, and you will never be disappointed." LOL! I like it :)

This is the best page yet! Solid layout, great gestures, great line, and the girl's expressions are fantastic!

P to the S- I really like the final design of Jake
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:iconlightlybow:
LightlyBow Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011  Student
Thanks for your help with it! The facial hair suggestion really helps.
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SuperheroGeek13 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
"Deino" like the pokemon? I kid! So a dino walking through the halls of the school isn't quite as odd to them as it is the us. Hmm...

Her expressions are all great here! Looking guilty, looking sick, and then just looking ticked-off. All excellent.
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LightlyBow Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2011  Student
Thank you! And I didn't know there was a pokemon named Deino, lol! I just figured it was a good word to use because it is a latin root, meaning great and terrible, in the word "dinosaur".
If it's already got an association with pokemon, maybe I should switch to a different word. What do you think? Is my use of the word deino going to be distracting for anyone?
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SuperheroGeek13 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I don't think its distracting. Its one of the newer pokemon.
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:iconlightlybow:
LightlyBow Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2011  Student
Thanks! Maybe I'll leave it then. :)
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animatrix1490 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
And, of course, I'm loving that Jake's the opposite. And that up-shot of him in panel one is so great. You really do a great job knowing your forms and drawing accordingly. Very dimensional designs that still are very shape-oriented. It's awesome.
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